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The First Draft Club

By Mary Adkins | Author & Book Writing Coachthefirstdraftclub.podbean.com
A podcast to help you overcome resistance and write with more joy, clarity, and confidence. If you’re working on a novel or memoir, stick around. Whether you haven’t written a word since your 5-paragraph essay days or you have an MFA in Creative Writing, this podcast is now your weekly coffee date on your journey to finish your first draft. Visit maryadkinswriter.com for more resources.
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Episodes

S09 E05 3 Ways I’m Using AI Ethically as a Novelist (Spoiler: It’s NOT to Write)

Let's settle this once and for all: Can novelists use AI ethically? In this episode, 3x HarperCollins novelist Mary Adkins shares exactly how she's integrating AI into her writing process WITHOUT letting it do the actual writing. Mary breaks down three specific applications that genuinely enhance her productivity while maintaining complete creative control. From multi-dimensional research queries to cleaning up dictated manuscripts, she shows how AI can handle the tedious tasks so writers can fo...

Jul 02, 202516 minSeason 9Ep. 133

S09 E04 How I am Using Dictation to Write My Next Novel

Ever wondered if you could write your novel while taking a walk? In this episode, Mary shares her honest experiment with dictation writing—how she wrote nearly half of her latest manuscript (around 50,000 words) using nothing but her iPhone and daily neighborhood walks. Mary breaks down her journey from being "dictation curious" to discovering a writing method that increased her productivity without sacrificing quality. She shares the exact tools she tested, the surprising learning curve, and wh...

Jun 25, 202516 minSeason 9Ep. 132

S09 E03 What Nora Ephron Can Teach Us About Writing, a.k.a. How to Be a Parent AND Write Books

In this episode of The First Draft Club, Mary shares the best advice she’s ever heard about balancing writing with parenting, courtesy of Nora Ephron. If you've ever felt like you're constantly dropping the ball—on your book, your job, or your family—this episode will speak directly to you. Mary breaks down the concept of “glass balls vs. plastic balls,” how it changed her perspective, and how it can help you make space for your writing without guilt. Spoiler: creativity gets to be a glass ball ...

Jun 18, 202514 minEp. 131

S09 E02 A Free, Easy Way to Make Sure Your Story Works No Matter Who You Are (and Why Plot Matters)

In this episode of The First Draft Club, Mary Adkins dismantles the elitist myth that plot is somehow “lowbrow” or optional in literary fiction. Drawing from her own experience and actual Big 5 rejection letters, she explains why plot is essential—not just for publication, but for reader satisfaction. Plus, she shares her favorite low-pressure, free method for making sure your story works, no matter where you are in your writing journey. Whether you’ve been told your prose is beautiful but “the ...

Jun 11, 202514 minEp. 130

S09 E01 How to Not Ruin Your Novel: The Phenomenon of Premature Optimization

There’s one mistake I see writers make over and over again—and it’s the reason so many great books never get finished. It’s called premature optimization, and while it’s a term from computer science, it applies perfectly to writing a novel. In this episode, I break down what premature optimization looks like for writers, why it’s so dangerous in a first draft, and how it’s connected to the failure of a now-forgotten Google product (RIP Google Wave). I also share real rejection letters from Big 5...

Jun 04, 202513 minEp. 129

S08 E09 Special Guests! Welcome, the Podcast is a Gameshow Now

Mary invited two fellow novelists and colleagues in The Book Incubator, Harrison and Autumn, to join her for a game she made up! Meet The Feedback Game: What would you do with X feedback? Revise? Move on? Freak out? ---- Watch on YouTube at https://www.youtube.com/@maryadkins

Feb 05, 20251 hr 3 minSeason 8Ep. 126

S08 E07 Killing Your Non-Darlings in Revision

Have you wondered why you have trouble making revisions even when you know it's necessary? Mary explores this phenomenon and shares her own struggles with loss aversion. --- S08 E03 How to Fix an 80% Good Book Getting Rejections: https://www.podbean.com/eas/pb-xqce2-1750a3c ---- Watch on YouTube at https://www.youtube.com/@maryadkins

Jan 22, 202513 minSeason 8Ep. 124

S08 E05 All the Numbers in Publishing No One Talks About

What are the actual sales numbers for authors who get book deals versus authors who self-publish? Mary gets into the data—yep, hardcore math—to help you weigh the pros and cons (financially) of the two major publishing paths. -Free training on how much you can make on your book: https://www.thebookincubator.com/free-training -Blog post summary: https://maryadkinswriter.com/blog/how-much-do-authors-make ---- Watch on YouTube at https://www.youtube.com/@maryadkins...

Dec 18, 202426 minSeason 8Ep. 122

S08 E04 My Top 5 Books of 2024 as a Writer

Mary shares the novels and memoirs that came out in 2024 that left her with the memorable reading experiences from a craft and writing perspective—ones that taught her something about writing or showed her something new about what literature can do. The books are (in no particular order): - The Wedding People by Alison Espach - Molly by Blake Butler - Old Enough by Haley Jakobson - Grief is for People by Sloane Crosley - Madwoman by Chelsea Bieker She wants you to know that Margo's Got Money Tro...

Dec 11, 202428 minSeason 8Ep. 121

S08 E03 How to Fix an 80% Good Book Getting Rejections

In the last episode, Mary talked about how a 90% great book will get rejections 100% of the time. How do you make up the difference? Whether it's a 40% gap you need to close or a 5% gap, Mary shares her recommendations. ---- Watch on YouTube at https://www.youtube.com/@maryadkins

Dec 04, 202416 minSeason 8Ep. 120

S08 E02 Why You Can Write an Amazing Book That Doesn't Get Published

Mary talks about why a 90% great book will get rejected 100% of the time...and how to tell if that's what's happening from the rejections you're getting. She: - Shares a sample (real) rejection letter - Discusses examples of a 10% gap between good and great - Talks about why this means you shouldn't give up, you should revise ---- Watch on YouTube at https://www.youtube.com/@maryadkins

Nov 27, 202416 minSeason 8Ep. 119

S08 E01 The Black List: The new publishing shortcut for aspiring novelists

We're back for Season 8! Mary talks about a newcomer to publishing—The Black List—and shares costs, benefits, and how it could potentially save you months (or even years) in your publishing journey. If you dream of publication but dread the long, uncertain querying process, this episode is for you. Show Notes: In this episode, I cover:· What is The Black List? Learn how this groundbreaking platform, originally created for Hollywood screenwriters, works—and why it’s now disrupting the world of fi...

Nov 20, 202421 minSeason 8Ep. 118

S07 E11 Should You Hire a Book Publicist?

Authors are hiring their own publicists—but how do you know if a publicist is worth the cost? Mary shares the questions she'd ask. --- PublicityxChristina: https://www.publicityxchristina.com/

May 30, 202420 minSeason 7Ep. 116

S07 E09 The #1 Resource for When You're Querying

How do you find the right literary agents or publishers to query? There's one resource that's worth every penny (and this isn't sponsored content): Publisher's Marketplace . Here's why, and how to use it.

May 02, 202416 minSeason 7Ep. 114

S07 E08 The Lean-In Method for Assessing Feedback

How do you get feedback without letting it derail you? The risk is real. Mary shares the single criterion she uses in deciding whether or not to take a piece of feedback.

Apr 18, 202412 minSeason 7Ep. 113

S07 E06 Rufi Thorpe (with Mary) on How to Control Your Reader's Mind

In this sneak peek into the private podcast inside The Book Incubator, Mary and Rufi discuss what they label "Newtonian Narratology" (you think we're kidding!), a.k.a. why it's better for your characters to try not to cry than to cry, and why you might not need to learn how to write that one emotion you struggle to write, after all.

Mar 28, 202440 minSeason 7Ep. 111

S07 E04 3 Publishing Myths that Are Making Me Mad

There are people online selling solutions you don't need to problems that don't exist. As a writer aspiring to be published, it pays to be savvy. Mary unpacks 3 of these myths so you can avoid traps.

Mar 14, 202415 minSeason 7Ep. 109

Live with Debut Novelist & Book Incubator grad Gayle Brown on her pub day!

We interrupt this post-season break to bring you a chat between Mary and Gayle Brown, an alum of The Book Incubator whose debut novel that she wrote in the program is out this week. Learn about her writing journey, what pub day feels like, and what advice she has for getting a literary agent. You can buy A Deadly Game at Amazon ( https://shorturl.at/gsvE3 ) or Barnes and Noble ( https://shorturl.at/nyF18 ), or leave a review on Goodreads ( https://shorturl.at/eopsG )....

Dec 14, 202327 minEp. 105

S06 E09 3 New Tips for Writing Better Dialogue

In this episode, Mary builds on the 5 tips for writing stronger dialogue she shared back in the first episode of Season 5. These 3 strategies will help improve your dialogue further. ----- Season 5, Episode 1: https://thefirstdraftclub.podbean.com/e/how-to-write-compelling-diagloue/

Nov 09, 202311 minSeason 6Ep. 104
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